Vinity's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Witchtober 07 - Pizza]

It took me 20 seconds to understand what was going on :sadness: but hey, at least the tiger and the hippie got pizza! ahem, that thing in the background...

[Amber’s Webshow #8 - Advice for Handling Bullies]

The cute character design makes it so I can't take it too seriously, haha, but at the same time it makes me sad to see Amber sad :( it's impossible not to identify with it. The advice about bullying, despite it being basic, the way they expressed it seemed pretty perfect to me. By the way, I like Zoe's method on page 15 :). The topic could be extended further, personally, ignoring a bully is an option, but it would be preferable to talk to them to help them with their problems, argue with adults, etc. Things like blocking are a way of wanting to live in your own world, but I understand because sometimes people are bad people just for being bad people. Beautiful comic number 8 :)

AWildDomino responds:

Perfect perspective! I agree fully with everything here. This is a topic and like many others featured in this series could be extended and have way further options of being dealt with. I love the inclusion of talking to the bully and trying to get into their feelings and try to help them cope, I think that's a great idea and I do agree that when you block people that make you uncomfortable, you are just living in your own world :D I heavily appreciate the other perspective here ⭐

[Sue n' Clark: Chapter 1]

A rather strange story, but a good one with a humorous twist. Thanks to this, I learned several new words. The designs are quite unusual, and the overall plot is a bit bizarre, haha, but I like it. By the way, on page 15 it says "sinsiter." My first language is Spanish, not English. But after searching, I guess it was an attempt to spell "sinister." Next time, look twice. (or maybe I'm missing something :P)

[Witchtober 06 - Fishing]

You have to be too brave to make each prompt a continuation of the previous one, phew. :skull:

[LISA: THE PAINFUL]

This is actually one of the best artworks i've seen all year, 11/10

[intento de comic :3]

El comic parece hecho por una persona diferente a quien hizo la descripción jajaja, santo señor... Ese estilo artístico es demasiado abstracto para un ser tan simple como yo, perdón por haberlo visto sin su permiso. (incluso con la descripción no entendí que paso pero me encanta jaja)

[Gigi Murin in somewhere]

Don't try to rush things. If you're in college and want to take a few moments to draw, that's fine, but don't rush it with the goal of keeping your art active.

In your artwork, and not just this one, I notice in general that there isn't much practice in certain aspects that should be, and you have many weaknesses that are noticeable at first glance: depth, perspective, anatomy, poses, shading (flat and gradient), composition, etc., everything is lacking. You should try applying aspects like a "relationship between where you should include line art and where you shouldn't," and perhaps study the more fundamental aspects of art. His head is huge, and his facial parts are inconsistently sized and poorly positioned. The shading is fine in some places, but in others, it doesn't make sense. And the background doesn't help the main focus (the character), as it seems to be a different style from what we have in front of us. Because of the tons of textures and lineless art, there's a lot of polish to be done, but that doesn't take away from the fact that it has its good points. Anyway, you just need to dedicate time to it, but given the university, it's the least you have, but I wish you luck anyway.

By the way, it reminds me of the path of the serpent in Dragon Ball haha.

Finasty responds:

Finally someone notice it...
Yeah, i uses a lot of brushes made by users for the background, so that the background doesn't feel too plain and empty, no wonder why you see a lot of lineless background, and about everything you tell here.

I'm drawing my art with a help of 3D models to he honest, and since android is small but long, it might be affecting the perspective, angle and many more whatsoever, and there are also some part where the perspective of the art feels off, yeah, that one too, since im still trying to learn to do the most part i still think it's difficult

Thanks for noticing that

[Witchtober 1 - Tree]

I love the expressions you draw! they're so funny... Although I shouldn't laugh because I'd have the same face if I were given a magic staff like that.

[Victoria]

I love Victoria's design, quite charming. Even though it's a bit similar to the generic witch design, it's an 11/10 in my opinion.